It's promising

The concept is good, graphics and animation are also quite good, but your timing needs some serious work. Other than that I'd suggest keep at it cause i can some potential.

interesting idea

having not actually read the book to see what you're on about I can however see the point you're trying to put across and I think you've hit on the head

It was alright I spose

Not exactly bordering on origniality here, the humour's been ripped off but I'm giving it a 5 cause it was kinda funny